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Patty Hajdu

82 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Don Davies (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the real nature of the current government is starting to appear: Shovel money at corporations and attack the rights of workers. Today, the Liberals will introduce legislation that would undermine collective bargaining in Canada. They want to eliminate workers’ constitutional right to strike. The New Democrats know that to truly build Canada strong, we need a healthy and respected working class. It is workers who build this country and keep it moving. Why are Liberals intervening for wealthy investors, instead of standing with workers, who want fair and safe workplaces?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 50%The ask 35%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsthis government has said time and again that we will always respect a worker’s constitutional right to strike. The ask · 29 wordsIf the member wants to be helpful, they will support this government as we invest in the skilled trades, many of them with unionized members, to build Canada strong. Claims · 23 wordsWe are investing in the trades and training.Vague promise We are investing in unions.Vague promise We are investing in workers.Vague promise We are investing in companies.Vague promise Positioning · 12 wordsWe are building Canada strong with the workers who power our country.PositioningPartly on point

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