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Ellis Ross

133 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I thank my colleague for all the work he has done over the years supporting reconciliation and economic development for indigenous peoples. There is a certain irony in the approach of the government, because we have a Prime Minister who has not shown much respect for Parliament. He ignored our calls to reconvene Parliament to discuss the crisis involving Canada-U.S. relations. He has not been forthcoming with Parliament about various issues. However, we have a bill where he is proposing an additional separate bureaucracy that would oversee the government’s action in the context of modern treaties. It strikes me that the government could and should respect the accountability mechanisms we already have in place. It could be more engaged with the work of Parliament. It could be more present in Parliament and more willing to provide information to Parliament about what it is doing as it relates to modern treaties and also about a broad range of other domains. I wonder what my colleague thinks about this: instead of the government’s creating an additional separate bureaucracy, its actually being more engaged with and more forthcoming with the mechanisms and institutions we already have that are designed to promote accountability.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Positioning 12%Reasoning 39%Claims 31%The ask 18%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 12 wordsthat is exactly it. Everybody is failing to talk about the outcomes.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 31 wordsDo we really need another report after 20 years of reports saying the exact same thing?1 If there is no accountability and no follow-up, then what are we getting in return? Claims · 8 wordsIt is crucial now that Canada start building. Positioning · 4 wordsEverybody agrees with that, PositioningUnearned certaintyClaims · 13 wordsbut the partners on the ground are actually begging and screaming for something. Reasoning · 21 wordsI think those first nations should come here to see the other side of this and see how this place works, Claims · 20 wordsbecause the announcements are really not doing anybody any good, whether we are talking about first nations or non-first nations. The ask · 24 wordsI think this is a great time for government to actually fulfill its obligations and authority, and to fulfill the promises of the treaty.Partly on point

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