“Madam Speaker, could my colleague and friend provide his thoughts on the importance of recognizing that Bill C-10 would establish an independent agent of Parliament? By doing so, it would, I believe, not only for the current government but also for future governments, provide an excellent opportunity to have more transparency and more accountability on what is a critically important file for all Canadians.”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 80. The grade is held to 64, 30 above Relevance.
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Reasoning 33%Claims 57%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsthe member used some deeply meaningful words: transparency, responsibility, accountability, listening and collaboration.1ThanksReasoning · 26 wordsAll of these are very important if we want to make progress on some of the major projects that the Canadian government is trying to implement.Partly on pointClaims · 30 wordsAll of these major projects are going to transform our economy, create more, better jobs for our children, young people and others, and lead to a cleaner economy and environment.Off pointReasoning · 17 wordsNone of this is possible unless we work respectfully with indigenous peoples and respect their rights specifically.Claims · 45 wordsAs my colleague mentioned several times today, the purpose of the office of the commissioner for modern treaty implementation is to ensure that the Canadian government has all the tools, including oversight tools, to ensure that its relations with indigenous peoples support other federal initiatives.2Partly on point