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Garnett Genuis

170 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Kelly McCauley (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, in my colleague’s excellent speech, he covered a lot of important information regarding Parliament and the way we act. One of the foundations of our parliamentary system, of course, is ministerial responsibility, whereby a minister is accountable to Parliament for the administration of their department and the decisions it makes. We heard the Minister of Crown-Indigenous Relations this morning in her opening speech on this bill state that the implementation of modern treaty commitments would not be done through her department; rather, it would be passed on to the commissioner instead. I wonder if my colleague would like to opine on the decision of the Liberal government to say that ministers would not be responsible anymore and unelected commissioners would be.”
Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Thanks 5%Procedure 3%Claims 48%Reasoning 21%Positioning 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 8 wordsthat is another excellent point from my colleague.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsThis is precisely the issue.Procedure Claims · 82 wordsThrough this bill, which sounds nice on the face of it, “Oh, we are creating this new commissioner,” the structure of the new position is to try to reduce the accountability, the pressure and the demands on the shoulders of the minister, while not really giving the commissioner the power to address the issues that are brought before him or her. It is kind of a diffusion and a weakening of the accountability structures that are supposed to exist within our system. Reasoning · 36 wordsSometimes with this kind of legislation, when there is a nice-sounding top line, we have to look underneath it and ask, “What is this bill actually doing? What are the effects of it going to be?” Positioning · 39 wordsAs my colleague illustrates, this reflects a kind of preferred corporate governance-oriented model that the Prime Minister wants to apply to this country that in fact weakens the structures of our parliamentary democracy as they are supposed to exist.Motive imputed

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