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Kevin Lamoureux

146 words · 8 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Clifford Small (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, it is great to stand on behalf of the people of Coast of Bays—Central—Notre Dame and speak for the first time as the member for the riding that has its former name back. I just heard Prime Minister Trudeau’s and his successor’s special spokesman brag about the success of the dental program and how it brings down the cost of living. Our constituency assistants have a group chat with other assistants right across Canada. The number one common issue that they are dealing with is seniors who have fallen through the cracks of this super-duper dental program. They are finding that after they have had their treatment or received their dentures or whatever procedure they had, they get a $100 bill, a $500 bill or a $900 bill. Last evening my constituency assistant from Gander told me that a senior citizen had gotten a $10,000 bill, and they do not know how to pay it. They are shocked. My question is for the spokesman for the Prime Minister. Will he stop bragging about this failed program, or will the government simply fix it?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 34%Positioning 19%The ask 47%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 35 wordsI did not name the member opposite, but I will now, as the member who actually said the national school food program is garbage and he does not believe in it.1 He called it garbage.2 Positioning · 25 wordsAm I surprised that he does not like the dental program that serves millions of Canadians?3 The answer is no. He does not surprise me.PositioningOff point The ask · 39 wordsWhat I would suggest to the member is that he talk to the thousands of children and seniors combined in his constituency who have benefited directly from the dental program and the school program, 4and maybe revisit his position, Claims · 15 wordsbecause his position seems to carry a great deal of weight within the Conservative Party.Partly on point The ask · 29 wordsIt is time that the Conservative Party, Off pointif it wants to deal with the issue of affordability, joins us and works collaboratively on this issue because it is important.Partly on point Positioning · 3 wordsIt supports Canadians.Positioning

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