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Kevin Lamoureux

134 words · 11 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Anna Roberts (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, my colleague spoke about seniors. I have seniors in my community who disagree with the government’s position. A lot of them are living below the poverty line. When we take single seniors and look at the amount of taxes they are paying versus a couple earning the same amount of money, it is higher. If we look at a couple earning $50,000, they are paying $600 in taxes, but if we look at an individual, they are paying $5,800. How is this going to benefit someone who cannot currently live within their current fixed income? Seventy-two per cent of seniors disagree with the government’s position.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Positioning 22%Procedure 10%Claims 64%Reasoning 4%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 29 wordsI think it is important to recognize that there is not just one area in which the government is giving support to Canadians but a multitude of different areas.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 13 wordsFor example, when we think of seniors, we can think of the benefits.Procedure Claims · 73 wordsI highlighted, for example, the dental program.1 I can highlight dialysis. Many seniors receive dialysis. We can talk about the seniors over age 75 who received a substantial increase over and above what would have been the guaranteed annual increase.2Partly on point Many seniors continue to drive. A senior over the age of 90 can still be driving, and they too will get breaks. There are individuals using buses. Everyone benefits from that 10¢-a-litre drop, 3Reasoning · 6 wordswhich has an impact on fares. Claims · 13 wordsDirectly and indirectly, there are tangible supports for seniors in many different ways.

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