“Madam Speaker, my colleague spoke about seniors. I have seniors in my community who disagree with the government’s position. A lot of them are living below the poverty line. When we take single seniors and look at the amount of taxes they are paying versus a couple earning the same amount of money, it is higher. If we look at a couple earning $50,000, they are paying $600 in taxes, but if we look at an individual, they are paying $5,800. How is this going to benefit someone who cannot currently live within their current fixed income? Seventy-two per cent of seniors disagree with the government’s position.”
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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 29 wordsI think it is important to recognize that there is not just one area in which the government is giving support to Canadians but a multitude of different areas.PositioningPartly on pointProcedure · 13 wordsFor example, when we think of seniors, we can think of the benefits.ProcedureClaims · 73 wordsI highlighted, for example, the dental program.1I can highlight dialysis.Many seniors receive dialysis.We can talk about the seniors over age 75 who received a substantial increase over and above what would have been the guaranteed annual increase.2Partly on pointMany seniors continue to drive.A senior over the age of 90 can still be driving, and they too will get breaks.There are individuals using buses.Everyone benefits from that 10¢-a-litre drop, 3Reasoning · 6 wordswhich has an impact on fares.Claims · 13 wordsDirectly and indirectly, there are tangible supports for seniors in many different ways.