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Abdelhaq Sari

132 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Karim Bardeesy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I really enjoyed the speech by my colleague from Bourassa. As he pointed out, this bill is targeted and aims to address a very specific situation in today’s global context. Could he explain how this measure is in keeping with the government’s wider range of efforts, including those he himself had in mind to improve affordability and the cost of living?”
Statement grade
C
61 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 7%Procedure 29%Claims 34%Positioning 30%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank my colleague for his question.Thanks Procedure · 16 wordsIt gives me another opportunity today to reiterate a number of measures introduced by our government.ProcedureVague promise Claims · 26 wordsAs I said earlier, a family of four can receive up to $1,890, 1and a single person, up to $950.2 This assistance is geared to families. Procedure · 11 wordsAs I mentioned earlier, something I hold very dear deserves reiterating.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsI am referring to the roughly 400,000 children a year who truly benefit from Canada’s national school food program.3 Positioning · 11 wordsThis is the kind of practical action I am talking about.Positioning Procedure · 11 wordsThere are others, but time prevents me from listing them all.Procedure Positioning · 29 wordsWhat bothers me the most, however, is seeing people on the other side of the House vote against family-oriented measures aimed at helping Canadians.4 That disappoints me a lot.Positioning

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