Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Mike Kelloway

127 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 94 / 100
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Claims 40%Reasoning 26%The ask 19%Thanks 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 24 wordsSeptember 21 to 27 marks Rail Safety Week across Canada.1 Our railways connect communities, move Canadian goods to market and support jobs and growth, Reasoning · 11 wordsbut as we strengthen these connections, safety must always come first. Claims · 27 wordsThrough the railway improvement program, our government works with communities and railway companies to make crossings and rail corridors safer through investments in infrastructure, technology and education, 2Reasoning · 7 wordsbut rail safety is a shared responsibility, The ask · 24 wordsso I encourage all Canadians to stay clear of tracks, use designated crossings and remain alert to the signals, the signs and the trains. Thanks · 19 wordsI thank Operation Lifesaver Canada, the railway workers, the first responders and everyone helping to keep our communities safe.Thanks Reasoning · 15 wordsWhen we look out for one another, we help ensure every Canadian gets home safely.

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