Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Matt Strauss

188 words · 19 sentences · 21 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
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Claims 85%Positioning 10%The ask 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 60 wordsBruce Kennedy was born and raised in the Waterloo region.1 He founded Stance Healthcare, based in south Kitchener, 2where they manufacture furniture for hospitals.3 They employ 125 of my friends and neighbours.4 They are a homegrown success story, but now they are suffering from tariffs. Since the new round last month, they have already lost $2 million in tariff costs.5 Positioning · 4 wordsThis cannot go on.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsI contacted the Liberal Secretary of State for Small Business on Bruce’s behalf.6 What she sent back was a list of announcements that the Prime Minister has made about support for tariff-affected businesses.7 That is all. It was a list of announcements. Positioning · 7 wordsIt is all talk and no results.Positioning Claims · 57 wordsStance Healthcare has not received a penny in actual support.8 Bruce and his workers face an impossible decision. They cannot keep losing hundreds of thousands a month.9 They either have to move jobs across the border or lay off 125 hard-working Canadians.10 The Prime Minister promised to win this trade war.11 He promised to support struggling businesses.12 Positioning · 8 wordsIt is five minutes to midnight for Stance.Positioning The ask · 10 wordsI call upon the Prime Minister to keep his promises.

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