Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Greg McLean

172 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
B
78 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 38%Positioning 40%Procedure 6%The ask 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 65 wordsworking Canadians are doing their best in a K-shaped economy, where those with assets are doing relatively well, while those striving to buy their first home are seeing that dream move out of reach. The government has created a financial reality where Canadians are asked to take on more debt, pay more interest and accept a lower standard of living than the generation before them. Positioning · 69 wordsWork harder and expect less is not the legacy we were supposed to leave our children, yet the Liberal government continues to manage expectations downward because its policies have led to a less prosperous country. That means lower results for everyone, including less food security, less shelter and lower expectations for health outcomes. A generation’s future is being pulled back because that is the price of the government’s choices.Positioning Procedure · 11 wordsWhere we are is clear.Unearned certainty How we got here is evident.ProcedureUnearned certainty The ask · 27 wordsWhat Canadians need now is a government prepared to change course, restore opportunity and build a future where the next generation can contribute more and expect more.

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