Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Andrew Lawton

163 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 10%Positioning 10%Claims 66%Procedure 4%The question 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 16 wordsI may remind the House that, unlike the member prior, only my tie is red today.Aside Positioning · 16 wordsIt is very important for us to stand up in the House for affordability for Canadians.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsA new Royal Bank of Canada survey found that more than half of parents with adult children aged 18 to 40 provided financial support over the past year, contributing an average of $6,151.1 Procedure · 6 wordsIt is not just that generation.Procedure Claims · 75 wordsI met with a group of seniors in St. Thomas a couple of weeks ago. One of them said that she does not eat lunch because of the price of groceries. More shocking was when almost every other senior at the table said that they did not either. This is a fact of life in Canada, the same Canada of which the Prime Minister says affordability is the best it has been in a decade.2 The question · 17 wordsWould the Prime Minister like me to tell these seniors that, or will he do it himself?

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