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Leslie Church

126 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Romeo, a man in Aurora, has worked at a window manufacturer for over 30 years. He used to work overtime, in fact. Now he is down to two days a week. Homes are just not being built. He called me worried about his mortgage, his groceries and how he is going to provide for his family. He has heard all the announcements, but he cannot pay his mortgage with the announcements. He is tired of talk with no results. He needs work. When will the Liberal government finally keep its promise and get homes built so parents like him can get back to a full week’s work?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 69 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 26%Claims 64%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 33 wordsit is exactly Canadians like Romeo and Romeo’s family who are top of mind for us in our agenda and in the work that we are doing to support Canadians at this time.PositioningVague promise Claims · 81 wordsI hope Romeo has access to some of the initiatives we have brought forward, like the groceries and essentials benefit.1 Perhaps his family has access to affordable child care or to a Canada dental plan, 2or perhaps Romeo’s kids have access to the national school food program, 3which helps bring down the cost of groceries for families to the tune of about $800 a year.4 These are supports we have put in place that we ae going to continue to support, The ask · 12 wordsand I would ask the member opposite to help us in that.Partly on point

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