“Mr. Speaker, Canadians have heard a clear message from investors. They are ready to invest in Canada. Last week’s investment summit generated nearly $500 billion in investment commitments. Now we need to turn those commitments into projects, jobs and economic growth. Could the Minister of Energy and Natural Resources tell the House how the government is working to reduce regulatory duplication, cut red tape and get shovels in the ground?”
Statement grade
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 10%Promise 33%Claims 41%The ask 15%
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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 11 wordsI was speaking with my sister Sharon and my brother-in-law Jim, 1AnecdotePartly on pointPromise · 25 wordsand I explained to them that when we passed Bill C-5, we would apply everything we learned from major projects to all projects in Canada.2Vague promiseClaims · 37 wordsWe would learn from the shovels in the ground at the Darlington nuclear project, from the shovels in the ground at the Montreal port and from the shovels in the ground at the north coast transmission line, 4Promise · 10 wordsand we would apply that to all projects in Canada.Claims · 6 wordsThat is what Bill C-39 does.3The ask · 16 wordsWe really hope the members opposite will join with us and help us build Canada strong.