“Mr. Speaker, Liberal catch-and-release laws are resulting in a surge in auto thefts. In Peel region, auto theft is up 52% in the first seven months of this year over last year. Why? It is because these Liberals are all talk and no results on crime. At my community barbecue this summer, I had residents tell me they go to sleep at night hoping their car will be there the next morning. Why? It is because the Liberals’ talk of law reform is all talk, no results. When will the Liberals pass laws that keep repeat car thieves denied bail and in mandatory jail?”
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsmy colleague asked a direct question: When are we going to adopt laws to get tough on car thefts?ProcedureClaims · 86 wordsThe answer is June of this past year.1We developed these laws not in isolation behind closed doors but by meeting with police.They have garnered the support of the Canadian Association of Chiefs of Police and the Police Association of Ontario.2Even the cops in his own community are supporting the bail measures that we put in place.After we put these laws in place, we are starting to see statistics of crime coming down, specifically including auto thefts and home invasions in his province.3Positioning · 10 wordsHe tries to block progress every step of the way.PositioningPromise · 13 wordsWith or without his help, we will build a stronger and safer Canada.Off pointVague promise