“Mr. Speaker, that out-of-touch thoughts and prayers answer is not going to help the man who sent me his résumé and asked if I could help him find a job, or the couple who came into my office with their bank account statements and their household budget and asked me how they are going to keep a roof over their heads. It is not going to help the woman who shouted at me from a place of extreme fear that she had eight to 10 months before she has to consider medical assistance in dying because she cannot afford to live. I join them in wanting to know when the Liberal government will truly see the people who are struggling and adopt the policies Conservatives have proposed to restore the promise of Canada.”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 70. The grade is held to 58, 30 above Relevance.
58 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 58%Procedure 6%Positioning 36%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsI have spent time over the summer and the spring talking to constituents in the member’s riding.Partly on pointProcedure · 6 wordsWhat did I hear from them?ProcedureClaims · 40 wordsI heard back from them that we, as a government, invested $5 million in the Loaves & Fishes Community Food Bank in Nanaimo.1This is a new food distribution facility on Vancouver Island.2It improves year-round access to nutritious food.Partly on pointPositioning · 35 wordsI wish the member would tell her constituents about the things available in her riding that are being funded and that they can count on, instead of just collecting stories for the House of Commons.PositioningOff point