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Michelle Rempel Garner

94 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 85 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 44%Positioning 27%Procedure 12%The question 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordsa non-citizen was recently convicted of dealing major amounts of fentanyl in Hamilton.1 Positioning · 8 wordsPeople who deal fentanyl are merchants of death, PositioningProcedure · 11 wordsbut this is what the judge said when issuing the sentence: ProcedureClaims · 13 words“I am concerned about the immigration consequences that may result from the sentence”.2 Positioning · 17 wordsHe should have been more concerned about the lives ruined by the crimes committed by this non-citizen.Positioning Claims · 15 wordsInstead, he gave the fentanyl dealer a lenient sentence so they would not be deported. The question · 17 wordsWhy did the Liberals vote against our bill to stop this, 3and why is this practice continuing?

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