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Sean Fraser

129 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, a non-citizen was recently convicted of dealing major amounts of fentanyl in Hamilton. People who deal fentanyl are merchants of death, but this is what the judge said when issuing the sentence: “I am concerned about the immigration consequences that may result from the sentence”. He should have been more concerned about the lives ruined by the crimes committed by this non-citizen. Instead, he gave the fentanyl dealer a lenient sentence so they would not be deported. Why did the Liberals vote against our bill to stop this, and why is this practice continuing?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 25%Claims 24%Reasoning 28%Promise 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 32 wordslet me first condemn the behaviour of anyone who takes part in the trade or trafficking of fentanyl or other dangerous drugs that have the potential to take the lives of Canadians.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsFor our part, we have advanced a series of major legal reforms to ensure that criminals who commit serious crimes that pose a danger to the public find themselves behind bars.1 Reasoning · 36 wordsWe also believe that the judicial system in Canada should retain its independence to be able to consider a multitude of factors to ensure that the punishment fits the crime in a given set of circumstances. Promise · 30 wordsWe are happy to continue to look for ways in which we can strengthen the criminal justice system to protect Canadians and ensure justice for those who commit serious offences.Partly on pointVague promise

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