“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister asked our young people to make sacrifices while he and his government continue to spend recklessly. The Conservatives have identified $150 billion in potential savings, which amounts to $10,000 per family. How can we do that? We can do it by cutting the $20 billion per year that goes to consultants and scrapping the monster Alto high-speed rail project. It would also help if we could stamp out tax avoidance, a practice the Prime Minister is very good at. When will the Liberals match their rhetoric with results and start saving Quebec and Canadian families money?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 69. The grade is held to 56, 30 above Relevance.
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 14%Positioning 27%Claims 58%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Promise · 11 wordsYes, Mr. Speaker, we are going to work on tax avoidance.Vague promisePositioning · 21 wordsThat is a very important issue that the Prime Minister cares a lot about.My colleague is asking for real results.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 45 wordsCanada has the strongest economic growth in the G7.1We have created jobs three times faster than the United States, 2and we are leading the G7 when it comes to foreign investment.3Thanks to our summit, we have $500 billion on the table from investors.4Off point