Analysis · Point of order · beta

Elizabeth May

106 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

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Procedure 29%Claims 20%Thanks 6%Anecdote 24%The ask 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 31 wordsduring members’ statements, the S.O. 31 section, the hon. member for Similkameen—South Okanagan—West Kootenay was valiantly trying to make an important statement about what had happened in her community this summer.1Procedure Claims · 21 wordsI could barely hear her for the noise from the general hubbub. It was not malicious noise; it was just noise. Thanks · 6 wordsI know you try Mr. Speaker, ThanksAnecdote · 25 wordsbut really I felt so badly for the member for Similkameen—South Okanagan—West Kootenay. I do not know if she wants to try again, probably not, AnecdoteThe ask · 23 wordsbut please, when someone is talking about a heart-wrenching situation where people are running for their lives from wildfire, people should show respect.

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