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Sukh Dhaliwal

77 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Gord Johns (NDP). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, we know that Norway, where they created a sovereign wealth fund, has $2 trillion U.S. In fact, in royalties alone, the Norwegians generated over $300 billion last year because they took resources from a finite resource, from oil and gas, and they invested them. They have taken those royalties to do exactly the kinds of things that the government is talking about today, taking pressure off citizens when times are difficult. Instead, what did the current government do? It created a sovereign wealth fund that took the big oil and gas companies and let them off the hook. Right now, we have record profits with big oil and gas. Does my colleague not agree that when big oil and gas are profiting with record profits because of a war, the generational wealth should be invested in a sovereign wealth fund that can be invested in programs that can help take the pressure off Canadians and pivot to investing in renewable energy? This is a generational opportunity that is being lost right now.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 56%Claims 34%Promise 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 43 wordsone thing that I personally know and in fact all my constituents know is that the Prime Minister knows investments.Unearned certainty When it comes to creating this sovereign fund, he knows exactly where he is going and he is going to invest for Canadians.PositioningVague promise Claims · 26 wordsCanadians are the ones who will make money, and that money will be invested into the programs that the NDP cares for and always asks for. Promise · 8 wordsWe will continue to invest in those benefits.Off pointVague promise

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