Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Brad Vis

356 words · 15 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 40%Reasoning 22%The ask 9%Positioning 21%Promise 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 79 wordsthe last key point I would like to make with respect to the state of small business in Canada today comes from the president of PacifiCan, who, on a call with members of Parliament in British Columbia earlier this summer, stated that her department was not meeting the outlined time frame for delivering tariff rebates to the companies that had applied for those funds.1 As the government consistently states, we are in an economic war with the United States. Reasoning · 25 wordsI would hope that a key measure announced to support Canadian businesses during this time would be treated with more severity than we have seen. The ask · 23 wordsI would encourage the Minister of Housing and Infrastructure, who has responsibility for PacifiCan, to look closely at those programs and do better. Positioning · 12 wordsAll of us in the House have to stand up for Canada.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsWe need to stand up for Canada because our businesses are suffering. There is going to be a lot of new legislation put forward, Hidden agencyThe ask · 9 wordsand I implore the government to consider small businesses. Claims · 41 wordsThe information coming from the Canadian Federation of Independent Business is not good. The loss of confidence and the departure of our brightest young Canadians who feel they have a better future in the United States is not the Canadian way. Positioning · 15 wordsI know that collectively, in the House, we do not want to see that happen, PositioningReasoning · 53 wordsbut it will take hard work and more collaboration by the government, and listening to Conservative ideas, to improve that competitiveness and to bring in those structural reforms that are needed so young people, when they graduate from university, say that their best opportunity in life is to start a business in Canada. Positioning · 6 wordsI believe we can get there.Positioning Promise · 29 wordsI will be focusing in this session, with the mandate that I have been given, on pointing out where the government is not doing enough to support our entrepreneurs. Positioning · 40 wordsLet us work together. Let us build Canada up. Let us stand up for our entrepreneurs and do better for the people who pay our salaries, who pay taxes and who do not demand a lot and often give more.PositioningOff point

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