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Brad Vis

142 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, one thing I have noticed is that some of the policies the Liberals are bringing out now are obviously Conservative policies, but the difference is that when Conservatives were conceiving these policies, they were for a vision to insulate us from the issues and challenges that we are facing today. Would my colleague agree that it is too little too late from the Liberals, whereas if a Conservative government had been voted in, we would have solved these problems before they were even on our plate?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 30%Claims 42%Positioning 7%The ask 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 37 wordsI agree that many of the measures being put in by the Liberals right now are actually Conservative ideas, and I am glad to see some of those things being adopted, because they will make some improvements. Claims · 22 wordsWhat is happening right now is that the government is in a process of erasing the most socialist policies of Justin Trudeau, Positioning · 10 wordsand I am glad to see that erasure take place, PositioningClaims · 8 wordsbut we have seen a lot of damage. The ask · 21 wordsI will conclude by noting that we need more emphasis by the government on maintaining market access in the United States. Claims · 22 wordsThose business councils, the ones from Manitoba, talked about the existing trade relationships with the United States that need to be upheld.1 The ask · 10 wordsWe need to see more from the government on that. Claims · 7 wordsThat is where small businesses do business. Reasoning · 5 wordsWe have to support them.Off point

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