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Brad Vis

132 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Doly Begum (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I understand that the member’s riding is going through difficulties similar to those across the country. Bill C-38 would make life more affordable for Canadians. Would the member support a measure that would make life more affordable for Canadians, something that people across this country are calling for?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Procedure 15%Claims 36%Positioning 23%The ask 8%Reasoning 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI absolutely support Bill C-38, and I will be voting in favour of it.1Procedure Claims · 19 wordsI will note that when we tried to do the same thing last spring, the government rejected our proposal.2 Positioning · 30 wordsI am glad that its members have listened to their voters and to Canadians, understanding that what the Conservatives were proposing was a positive step forward to support our businesses.Positioning The ask · 11 wordsMy only hope is that the government extends this in perpetuity. Procedure · 6 wordsI am going to repeat this.Procedure Claims · 28 wordsSmall businesses right now need to maintain market access to the United States. That is where the majority of our exports go. I have worked at Global Affairs, 3Reasoning · 24 wordsand even though I agree with expanding global markets, we cannot forgo the existing economic relationships that underpin the entirety of the Canadian economy.Off point

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