Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, the member makes reference to the issue of the senior who makes $20,000 a year. I imagine that senior who is making $20,000 a year on a fixed income being able to receive dental benefits, yet the Conservatives want to take that dental benefit away from them. On the one hand, the member wants to stand up for seniors. On the other hand, he is voting against things that support affordability for seniors. Does that mean there is a new light that has shone over that particular member and he will say to the seniors who make $20,000 a year on a fixed income that he actually supports the dental program that the federal government is providing?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 71. The grade is held to 56, 30 above Signal.
56 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 72%Claims 5%Reasoning 23%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 71 wordsI support seniors living on fixed incomes, families and anybody who lives in my riding or across this country having the highest possible standard of life.We have vastly different views.Off pointAs I outlined in my speech, the government sees any problem as an opportunity to create some big new bureaucracy, spend a whole bunch of money and then, when asked about the results, say, “We spent x amount of dollars”.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 5 wordsPeople are struggling out there.Reasoning · 23 wordsPress releases saying they spent this much money do nothing to help feed Canadians, house them or keep them warm in the winter.Partly on point