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Jean-Yves Duclos

182 words · 9 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Mario Simard (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague astutely pointed out that the measure we are discussing this evening is tied to the current situation. He also talked about the measures the government has put in place to help people cope with the cost of living, even though we do not agree on everything. However, there is one matter the Liberal government often overlooks, namely, the issue of seniors. Those who have suffered the most in the wake of the pandemic are seniors aged 65 to 74, who continue to suffer from inequity and whose purchasing power has never increased. Since my colleague started off by saying that the government should help people when they are going through tough times or facing difficult economic conditions, does he agree with me that increasing old age security for people aged 65 to 74 would be a good measure?”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Greeting 5%Procedure 4%Claims 72%The ask 15%Aside 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 9 wordsI am very grateful for such an excellent question.Greeting Procedure · 7 wordsI want to briefly mention three points.Procedure Claims · 90 wordsFirst, as my colleague is aware, OAS has been increased for people over the age of 75 in light of the very clear evidence that seniors over the age of 75 not only have greater needs, 1but also lower incomes, 2and that older women, among others, live in more precarious circumstances for a variety of reasons that are well understood.Unearned certainty Second, I want to mention the Canadian dental care plan, which helps approximately 25,000 people in his riding, including several thousand seniors.3 This represents savings of about $800 a year.4 The ask · 27 wordsI encourage my colleague—whose leader, unfortunately, opposes the Canadian dental care plan—to talk about it at length with the seniors in his riding when he sees them.5Partly on point Aside · 8 wordsI am sure he meets with them regularly.Aside Claims · 41 wordsThe third point is automatic benefits. As I was saying, there are nearly 5.5 million Canadians whose tax returns will be processed automatically, 6which will maximize the chances for these seniors, for the most part, to receive the benefits they need.Partly on point

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