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Tamara Kronis

95 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the excise tax on gasoline has been a very high priority for the Prime Minister and the government in recognizing the issue of affordability. It is an important aspect that the government is wanting to pass. I want to extend my gratitude and recognize that we could not be passing it today without the collaboration of all members of the House of Commons. We see that the value is really for Canadians. It is a very important part of what the Prime Minister and the government as a whole have been talking about, so I want to express some appreciation for the collaboration. I think it is important to do so. I would just like to get the member’s comments about how we can do some wonderful things if in fact we want to work together to deliver for Canadians.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 19%Thanks 17%Positioning 64%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 10 wordsI feel as though I should buy a lottery ticket.Aside Thanks · 6 wordsThank you for those kind words, ThanksPositioning · 61 wordsand thank you for the recognition that we are here today extending this relief to Canadians because Conservatives have pushed this point over and over again. It is because we continue to bring up affordability, we continue to focus on the people we serve in our communities and we continue to bring their stories to the House over and over again.Positioning Thanks · 10 wordsI would say that it is wonderful to work together, ThanksAside · 8 wordsbut I would like to see you paying—Aside

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