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Arnold Viersen

138 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Doly Begum (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I listened intently, and I was quite intrigued by the story the member shared about the honey producer. It is remarkable to learn about some of the things that you are interested in. I want to ask something a little related to what you talked about but different from this specific legislation. If you were to suggest something that we could do as a Parliament, as government, to support producers like the one you referred to, the honey producers, for example, who are growing locally, what would you suggest? Sometimes we do end up with products that are not actual honey, for example, and it would be great to have some ideas on that.”
Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 63%Aside 13%The ask 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 45 wordsI do not know if the member knows this, but northern Alberta produces about a quarter of Canada’s honey.1 Alberta produces about half of Canada’s honey, 2and northern Alberta produces about half of that, 3so about a quarter of Canada’s honey comes from northern Alberta. Aside · 18 wordsI always say that my riding is the promised land. It is literally flowing with milk and honey.AsidePartly on point Claims · 15 wordsParticular places in the world are of concern when it comes to this adulterated honey. The ask · 18 wordsOne of the things we could do is block the border to some of these products coming in. Claims · 27 wordsThere is a biohazard risk with some of the mites that may come in with the product.4 Also, some players have been bad actors in the space. The ask · 15 wordsWe could just say that the door is shut to those places, particularly right now.

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