Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague is one of the most experienced members of the House in terms of years of service. In fact, she served for nearly a decade on the government side during the Harper years. In her speech, she was quite critical of our government’s economic policies, which aim to strengthen the Canadian economy and make it more resilient. Her former leader, Mr. Harper, spoke at our recent economic summit in Toronto about the value of our government’s economic policies. I would like to hear her thoughts on Mr. Harper’s speech at the recent economic summit in Toronto. I would also like to know how she reconciles her speech tonight with the one Mr. Harper gave in Toronto.”
Statement grade
D
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 55. The grade is held to 45, 30 above Relevance.
45 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 40%Positioning 18%Promise 41%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Aside · 35 wordsto bring back the spirit of former prime minister Harper in the House, he used to be reviled, but now he is seen as one of the best prime ministers we ever had in Canada.AsidePositioning · 16 wordsLike Prime Minister Harper, who made decisions based on what was right, this party does also, PositioningOff pointPromise · 36 wordsand we will do our job in Parliament in looking at each proposal that is made.Partly on pointVague promiseIf, like Mr. Harper, he supports certain things and we support certain things, we will vote in favour of them.Off point