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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 56 wordstoday we honour the life and extraordinary service of respected elder Angus Campbell of the Ahousaht First Nation, who passed away on September 10 at the age of 72.1For more than 50 years, Angus served his nation as chief councillor and council member, dedicating himself to strengthening Ahousaht and improving the lives of its people.2Thanks · 28 wordsThrough personal tragedy, change and challenge, he persevered with dignity and resolve.He brought wisdom, continuity and a deep commitment to his people throughout his years of leadership.ThanksClaims · 27 wordsAngus was also a devoted father to five children and three adopted children, 3and a source of love, guidance and strength to his many grandchildren and great-grandchildren.Thanks · 36 wordsHis legacy endures in the people he served and in the progress he helped achieve.Klecko klecko to Angus Campbell.May he rest in peace.May his service to Ahousaht be remembered for generations to come.Thanks