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Fraser Tolmie

153 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Claims 43%Procedure 8%Positioning 12%Promise 37%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 27 wordsI spent the summer travelling the communities of Moose Jaw, Lanigan, Watrous and Outlook and everywhere in between, listening to the people I am honoured to represent. Procedure · 12 wordsIn those conversations, I heard the same thing over and over again: ProcedurePositioning · 19 wordsCanadians are tired of watching Liberals spend on insiders and pet projects while families struggle to make ends meet.Positioning Claims · 7 wordsFarmers are struggling just to break even. Promise · 24 wordsI am back in the House, ready to fight for the communities of Moose Jaw—Lake Centre—Lanigan. That means standing up for the agriculture sector, Claims · 4 wordswhich feeds this country. Promise · 12 wordsIt means demanding that the Liberals focus on what matters to Canada, Claims · 28 wordsand it means defending the institutions that are important to Canadians, like the iconic Snowbirds, grounded by the Liberals, who are spending on everything but our nation’s priorities.1 Promise · 20 wordsI will keep fighting for the best interests of my people and their communities and demanding better for our country.Vague promise

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