Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Ryan Turnbull

153 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 36%Procedure 3%Positioning 7%Reasoning 29%The ask 20%Greeting 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordsas Canada faces growing uncertainty from a trade war that we did not start, our economic security and sovereignty can no longer be taken for granted. Procedure · 5 wordsThat raises a fundamental question: ProcedurePositioning · 10 wordsWho owns our economy and the businesses that comprise it?Positioning Reasoning · 33 wordsSovereignty is not just about what we produce. It is about who controls our businesses, where decisions are made and who benefits from the wealth we create together. That is why co-operatives matter. Claims · 29 wordsBy putting ownership in the hands of members, workers, farmers and consumers, co-operatives keep capital and decision-making rooted in communities here at home while building resilience for the future. The ask · 30 wordsThis Thursday morning, which is tomorrow, I invite all members to join me for breakfast with Co-operatives and Mutuals Canada to explore how these models can strengthen our local economies.1 Reasoning · 11 wordsRemember that more collective ownership means a stronger, more sovereign Canada. Greeting · 9 wordsI hope to see many of my colleagues there.Greeting

Analysed on