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Joël Lightbound

101 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, that is a lot of programs and a lot of words for very little in the way of results. Jessy from Centre-du-Québec is desperate. Her weekly grocery budget has gone from $120 to $170. She says it is clear that our dear Prime Minister has never had to pinch his pennies to buy groceries. Jessy is stretching every dollar to make ends meet. We want to help Jessy save money by axing all fuel taxes, not just suspending them briefly until next year. When will the Liberal government adopt our Conservative plan and give families a bit of breathing room?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The question 71%Claims 25%Positioning 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, The question · 14 wordscould my colleague explain to Jessy why he voted against the Canada child benefit?1 Claims · 25 wordsIn his own riding, that benefit helps 24,000 children, who receive $100 million every year, 2which is roughly $4,600 per child.3 He voted against that.4 The question · 58 wordsCould he explain to Jessy why he voted against dental care for 39,000 people in his own riding?56 Could he explain why he voted against the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, against a tax cut for 22 million Canadians and against the national school food program, 789which helps 100,000 children in Quebec by providing roughly $800 per family?10 Positioning · 4 wordsIt boggles the mind.PositioningOff point

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