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Steven MacKinnon

92 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, Bill C‑39 has nothing to do with making Canada strong. It is a bill for making democracy weak. It is 250 pages of measures that take an axe to almost every federal law, undermining our rights and harming our environment. In one of these measures, Ottawa is giving itself the power to designate any part of Quebec as a region of national interest and place it under federal control. Did the Prime Minister consult Quebec before seizing power over Quebec soil?”
Statement grade
D+
51 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 53%Claims 47%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 37 wordsone thing the Bloc Québécois has not yet understood is that we are going to work tirelessly and never give up on our efforts to promote Quebec’s development and provide jobs, opportunities and investments across the province.PositioningOff pointVague promise Claims · 43 wordsIf the member wants an example, she need only look at the Churchill Falls agreement, signed with Quebec and Newfoundland, in which the Prime Minister was personally and directly involved.1 This project will create 23,000 jobs and supply electricity for generations of Quebeckers.2Partly on point Positioning · 12 wordsThat is what it means to build, and we will continue building.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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