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Gary Anandasangaree

78 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Liberal parole is out of control. The family of Constable Todd Baylis and the Toronto Police Association recently asked for parole reform. The victim’s family has to go to parole hearings every two years. A Conservative bill would have changed that to every five years, and yet the Liberals voted against it. Will the Liberals listen to the family of Constable Baylis and the Toronto Police Association and do right, when they have previously done wrong?”
Statement grade
C
Average 62 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 35%Promise 18%Claims 47%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 27 wordslet me take a moment to remember Todd Baylis, who was killed in the line of duty in 1994.1 His bravery and sacrifice will never be forgotten.Thanks Promise · 14 wordsOur government is committed to strengthening our criminal justice system and protecting victims’ rights.Vague promise Claims · 37 wordsThat is why we passed Bill C-14, to strengthen bail and sentencing, 2as well as Bill C-16, to strengthen victims’ rights.3 I continue to engage with the Toronto Police Association to ensure that we strengthen our laws.Partly on pointVague promise

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