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Gary Anandasangaree

73 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, what an out-of-touch answer. Unlike that minister, I was a parole officer. Unlike that minister, I attended Constable Baylis’s killer’s parole hearing. Unlike that minister, I voted to change the hearing interval from two years to five years. If that minister wants to put his money where his mouth is, I have a proposal. Why does he not join me, Constable Baylis’s family and the Toronto Police Association? Let us have a meeting. He can look them in the eye and say exactly what he just said to the House. Will he have that meeting, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 12%Reasoning 34%Claims 12%Promise 41%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsit is unfortunate that this matter is being politicized.Positioning Reasoning · 25 wordsWhat I will say is that victims absolutely deserve their right to be heard, as well as to be in attendance at these important hearings.Partly on point Claims · 9 wordsWe have been working with the Toronto Police Association.1 Promise · 30 wordsMy commitment is to continue to work with them, to ensure that we have laws that reflect their needs but also to ensure the safety and security of all Canadians.Vague promise

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