“Mr. Speaker, Conservatives stand with Jeff Smith’s family as well. The Liberals are all talk, and there are no results. They created this mess. When Conservatives tried fixing it with Bill C-243, they voted it down. The brother of Todd Baylis said, “[The] killer’s rights are more important than mine, my dead brother’s, yours, or anybody else’s.” The Toronto Police Association agrees that this is wrong. Conservatives agree that this is wrong, because it is our mission to keep Canadians safe. We stand with victims. We stand with our brave officers. When will they?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 58. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 32%Claims 42%Promise 26%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordswith great respect, what a disingenuous comment.PositioningClaims · 33 wordsAll of us in this House, every single member of Parliament who was elected, stand with law enforcement, stand with victims and stand with those who have died in the line of duty.Positioning · 5 wordsThis is not a competition.PositioningPromise · 20 wordsWe will ensure the safety and security of Canadians, Vague promiseand we will always stand with those on the front lines.Vague promisePositioning · 13 wordsIt is shameful to suggest that one party stands with victims over another.PositioningOff point