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Ruby Sahota

92 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Tony Baldinelli (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Liberal government’s parole regime, a murderer can ask for freedom again and again. Each hearing forces grieving families to relive the worst trauma of their lives. Paul Bernardo’s fourth chance at parole is approaching. Once again, the families of Kristen French and Leslie Mahaffy are being forced to relive this nightmare. Victims’ families and police are calling for parole reform. Conservatives proposed legislation to make it happen. The Liberals voted no. Why are the Liberals protecting repeat parole hearings for killers instead of protecting victims’ families?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Claims 21%Reasoning 32%Positioning 25%Promise 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordswe have been working aggressively and diligently to reform the Criminal Code of Canada over the last 15 months.1Vague promise Reasoning · 29 wordsHowever, we are very careful in making sure that we pass legislation in this House that will stand up to our Constitution and to the Supreme Court of Canada. Positioning · 23 wordsThe Conservatives believe in creating laws in this House, and confusing Canadians with laws, that are never going to withstand a charter challenge.PositioningOff point Promise · 21 wordsWe are open to making reforms, but we will make the reforms that are right for our country and for Canadians.Vague promise

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