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Sean Fraser

114 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, in June, a 19-year-old woman in Sainte-Foy was shot after being mistaken for someone else. Two suspects were arrested and released on a promise to appear. They were recently rearrested, and a third suspect was apprehended earlier today. Will the Prime Minister tighten bail rules and keep people accused of violent crimes in jail when the safety of Canadians is at risk?”
Statement grade
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Average 88 / 100
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Claims 77%Promise 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 88 wordsmy colleague is well aware that we introduced a bill to combat serious crime in our communities and to make the criminal justice system tougher on those who commit offences.1 We have not only put forward laws that are going to do more to keep violent offenders behind bars.2 We have also included stronger supports for participants and families when it comes to their role, when it comes to understanding the impact on those families and victims at parole hearings and transfers between different levels of security systems.3 Promise · 26 wordsWe will work with victims to understand their concerns, Vague promiseand we will advance policies on the advice of experts and police to help keep communities safe.Partly on pointVague promise

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