“Mr. Speaker, Toronto police constable Todd Baylis was just 25 years old when he was murdered in the line of duty. His family has relived that tragic loss at parole hearings in 2019, 2021 and 2024, and will again in just a few months. For 14 years, victims’ advocate Lisa Freeman from Oshawa has repeatedly been forced to face the axe murderer who bludgeoned her father to death. Liberal parole has caused this problem, and victims’ families are demanding change. Why do the Liberals keep making victims constantly relive their worst day? People get a chance at parole every time.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 53 wordsalthough I respect the sentiment, this is not Liberal parole.We have not made changes under this government.1People do not get parole every single time.2For instance, in this case, the assailant has not gotten parole.3Therefore, I think a lot of what is being said by the Conservatives is not factual.Positioning · 7 wordsThey are trying to politicize this matter.PositioningOff pointPromise · 13 wordsAs I have said before, we are open to amendments that are appropriate.Partly on pointVague promise