“Mr. Speaker, heinous serial killers should not get to plead their case and have a chance at parole every couple of years. This is precisely why Conservatives brought forward the Conservative bill Brian’s bill: to respect victims’ families. Paul Bernardo is a convicted serial rapist and killer, yet he will get his fourth chance at parole, while the victims’ families suffer. Trial lawyer Tim Danson said, “It’s just pure entertainment for him. He has no remorse.” Why do the Liberals keep making the families of victims relive the worst days of their lives?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 74 / 100
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Thanks 18%Claims 66%Promise 16%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 17 wordslet me take a moment to honour the lives of Leslie Mahaffy, Kristen French and Tammy Homolka.2ThanksClaims · 61 wordsAs the House may know, this individual who has been in jail for a long period of time went to the University of Toronto Scarborough campus and petrified my community of Scarborough—Guildwood—Rouge Park.1The impact that this individual has had on our society is unprecedented, and I know that many people continue to struggle with the impact this individual has had.Promise · 15 wordsI can assure the House that we will continue to work with the Toronto police—Partly on pointVague promise