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Steven MacKinnon

109 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Juanita Nathan (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the global landscape is changing quickly. I am constantly reminded by my constituents in Pickering—Brooklin to act quickly to secure our country’s economic sovereignty. That is why, on the first day of this fall sitting, our government introduced the building Canada strong bill. Can the Minister of Transport please explain how this legislation will help us respond to the challenges we are facing today and deliver our government’s mandate to build Canada strong?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Thanks 19%Positioning 18%Claims 62%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI want to thank my hon. colleague for her work and for her incredible advocacy for continuing to build our country.Thanks Positioning · 20 wordsWe are indeed building at the speed the moment requires and at the pace Canadians expect.Vague promise This means being ambitious.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 68 wordsIt means moving quickly and getting big projects built while continuing to talk to Canadians and to stakeholders.Vague promise That is why we brought forward the building Canada strong bill on our first day back.1 It would give us the tools to build bigger, for Canada to have ambition, for our young people to look forward to employment for the decades to come and for our country to be—

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