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Yasir Naqvi

111 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Eric Duncan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the latest survey from the National Payroll Institute demonstrates how the Liberals are out of touch and Canadians are out of money. More than one in four employed Canadians are living paycheque to paycheque and would struggle to cover their bills if their pay was delayed by just one week. This is at the highest level in five years. Things continue to go in the wrong direction, and the Liberals continue to double down on the same failed approaches. Our Conservative plan is to save Canadians money by taking all federal taxes on gas, about 25¢ a litre, off until Canada Day next year. Will they finally adopt our plan?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Greeting 15%Positioning 53%Claims 26%Promise 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsit is good to be back in the House. I hope all members had a good summer.Greeting Positioning · 27 wordsOur government is focused on making sure that we are not only building Canada from coast to coast to coast, but also building partnerships around the world.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsWe are diversifying trade like we have never seen in the history of our country.Unearned certainty Our businesses have access to 1.5 billion consumers through tariff-free partnerships at this moment, 1Promise · 6 wordsand we plan to double that.Vague promise Positioning · 32 wordsThat is our plan. The Minister of International Trade, the Prime Minister and the entire government is focused on building those partnerships so we can help grow our businesses around the world.PositioningOff point

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