Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, on behalf of the Conservative members from British Columbia, I would like to congratulate the member for North Vancouver—Capilano on his victory and welcome him to this chamber. I remember that when I came to Ottawa, my predecessor was also a minister. I know how difficult it is when people say that we have big shoes to fill. I took it as a challenge. I hope the member does too. In the member’s speech, he talked about a lot. I would like to hear how his election was, what he heard on the streets of his riding and what his priorities as a member of Parliament in this parliamentary session are.”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 39. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Clarity.
30 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 6%Procedure 15%Anecdote 72%Promise 7%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsgenuinely, I thank the hon. member across the way.ThanksProcedure · 23 wordsIt is an important opportunity to speak about a lot of what we heard in the community, over the past two months especially.ProcedureAnecdote · 113 wordsIt was and is a fascinating time, with so much vulnerability in all the communities we come from given exposure to the trade war, but it is also a time to reflect on a lot of the upside.I found at every door a lot of hope for that too.Off pointThere was hope in buying more Canadian, investing in more of our own community capacities to build big again, and thinking big again about how our country can build more independence into so many facets of our economy.There was a lot of hope and optimism about that, even for a place with such incredible exposure to the rest of the world’s economy, AnecdotePromise · 11 wordsand we are going to carry those priorities into this House.Partly on pointVague promise