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Steeve Lavoie

167 words · 13 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Élisabeth Brière (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I commend my colleague for his excellent speech. He is obviously very proud of his beautiful region of Quebec City. In August, the government awarded a contract worth over $11 billion to the Davie shipyard to build six new icebreakers. I would like my colleague to tell us how such a contract, which is good for our workers and our suppliers, fits into Bill C-39.”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 3%Claims 74%Reasoning 14%Positioning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsthat is an excellent question.Thanks Claims · 113 wordsWe were fortunate to be able to make that extraordinary announcement this summer after years and years of working with Davie, a real gem in our community.1 I worked in the Quebec City area as the president of the chamber of commerce.2 The Davie shipyard is located on the other side of the river, in Lévis.3 Most of its suppliers are from the Quebec City area. The rest of them are from the surrounding areas. I reviewed the list of all of the suppliers and they are from all over Quebec. An announcement like this has a direct impact on a community like Lévis. We are talking about 5,000 workers, 5,000 good jobs.4 Reasoning · 10 wordsThat gives those families predictability because these are long-term contracts. Claims · 10 wordsIt provides predictability for Davie over the very long term. Reasoning · 13 wordsIt will enable business owners to invest in their companies to supply Davie. Positioning · 16 wordsThis is the kind of thing that the government wants to do and that people need.PositioningPartly on point

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