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Steeve Lavoie

149 words · 14 sentences · 20 clauses

Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the member opposite mentioned the administrative burden. Under Bill C-39, proponents would be allowed to do preliminary, early site work, but only if the minister deemed it in the public interest. Why is the government creating such subjective ministerial discretion instead of just simple, clear, predictable rules? Why add to the red tape?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 18%Reasoning 18%Claims 27%Promise 17%Aside 9%Positioning 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 27 wordsI talked about something very important in my speech: the status quo. I have talked about it throughout my career, and I will keep talking about it.Procedure Reasoning · 13 wordsPeople often keep doing the same things while hoping to achieve different results. Claims · 4 wordsWe introduced a bill. Promise · 17 wordsWe want to do things differently. We want to speed up projects and provide predictability for investors. Reasoning · 14 wordsDoing things faster does not mean being less rigorous. We must always be rigorous. Aside · 13 wordsWe can walk and chew gum at the same time, Partly on pointas they say.Aside Promise · 9 wordsThat is what the government is going to do.Vague promise Claims · 36 wordsThis will provide predictability for businesses and contractors, who will be able to pursue projects. The process used to take up to eight years, 1which is way too long, but it will go much faster now. Positioning · 16 wordsWe are doing the right thing. We are taking action, Vague promiseand that is what Canadians want.PositioningPartly on point

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