Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Dan Albas

189 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
A–
85 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 45%Reasoning 11%Positioning 20%Procedure 3%Anecdote 10%Aside 11%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 16 wordsbear in mind that I am merely passing on concerns that others have expressed to me, Reasoning · 21 wordsbecause, at the end of the day, choosing to introduce an omnibus bill is a choice, and that choice has consequences. Claims · 21 wordsWe must not forget that there is a reason why a previous Liberal government promised never to resort to omnibus bills.1 Positioning · 38 wordsOf course, that promise was sincere, was it not? Surely the Liberals would never make a promise they had no intention of keeping just to get elected, would they? Did they say they were going to spend less?PositioningOff point Procedure · 5 wordsI am getting off topic.Procedure Anecdote · 19 wordsFor a recap of where we are today, I feel it is a bit like a sci-fi franchise movie.Anecdote Claims · 48 wordsIn episode one, the government needed a big bill to make Canada strong, which is Bill C-5.2 About a year later, when everything promised in year one did not happen, it of course needed a sequel, another new omnibus bill, to make Canada strong, 3which is Bill C-39.4 Aside · 21 wordsI suspect next year or later in this Parliament we may live to see another so we can finish the trilogy.Aside

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