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Kevin Lamoureux

211 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Claims 36%Procedure 2%Aside 4%Anecdote 25%Reasoning 20%The ask 12%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsthe issue of MAID came before the House again because of a superior court decision in Quebec.1 Procedure · 4 wordsThat we can say.Procedure An hon. member: Oh, oh! Hon. Kevin Lamoureux: Aside · 9 wordsMadam Speaker, they can call it what they want.Aside Claims · 38 wordsIt is still a superior court in Quebec. Moving forward, the issue has been brought to the House, and a decision has been made. There is a sunset clause within the legislation that does need to be addressed.2 Anecdote · 52 wordsOn the issue of mental illness, ever since I have been a parliamentarian, I can remember Dr. Gulzar Cheema, one of my colleagues in the Manitoba legislature, arguing and articulating on why it was so important that we have not only a department of health but also a department of mental health, 3AnecdoteReasoning · 15 wordsbecause we need much more to recognize mental health as part of our health system.Partly on point Claims · 22 wordsThere are severe files within mental health that I believe, if this legislation were to pass, would never, ever get any consideration, Reasoning · 9 wordsand I do not believe that would be appropriate. The ask · 26 wordsGiven the very importance of the issue of mental health, let us have more discussions. I would like more provinces to establish departments of mental health, Off pointReasoning · 19 wordsbut at the end of the day, I do not necessarily believe the exclusion is the way to go.

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