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Julie Dzerowicz

118 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Karim Bardeesy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am very engaged in this debate and my colleague’s speech. We share adjoining ridings. Therefore, some of the concerns and questions that my colleague is hearing are also being asked in Taiaiako’n—Parkdale—High Park. I want to ask her, given her experience in this Parliament, to speak about the continuity pieces around the environmental regulations here. Also, would she not agree that it is important for people on the many sides of the environmental and resources extraction debate to agree that a quick decision is better than a slow decision, no matter which side of the debate they are on?”
Statement grade
B
79 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Reasoning 58%Procedure 1%Claims 10%Promise 31%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 69 wordsI think for us five years was too long for a decision to be made by our government. The world has so completely changed that we needed to put a completely new process into place.Unearned certainty We needed to create a process that would eliminate any type of overlap or duplication. We wanted to create certainty and an easy way for businesses and projects to be able to go ahead. Procedure · 1 wordsTherefore, ProcedureClaims · 12 wordswhile I would say we wanted to have one decision, one project, Promise · 36 wordsand one year, I believe we will be able to do the proper amount of assessment and study within that year to be able to make good decisions that are long-standing and good for this country.1Vague promise

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