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Richard Bragdon

103 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, my hon. colleague seems to be in full agreement when it comes to the exceptional powers the government is giving itself to get around environmental laws. I would like to point out that Bill C-39 even allows for the creation of economic zones where projects will be pre-approved. Projects will be approved before they are even assessed. Obviously, we can expect companies to sue the government if, after the assessment, the government decides a project is no good. I wonder if my colleague is concerned about that. Does he not think this fits perfectly into a government strategy to deploy an oil arsenal using public funds? His party has stated that oil companies benefit from corporate welfare. The government is gearing up to invest $40 billion in a mega-pipeline project. Is my colleague in favour of giving public funds to oil companies?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
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Thanks 10%Positioning 30%Claims 60%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI thank my colleague from the beautiful province of Quebec.Thanks Positioning · 23 wordsWhat we need now is a government that will actually do something. We need a government that gets real things done for Canadians.Positioning Claims · 62 wordsWhen we rank 38 out of 38 among OECD nations for GDP per capita, that is an indictment of the government’s policies, 1which have failed to deliver real results. Even though the pronouncements are grand, the results have been very much disastrous as it relates to competitiveness for our industries, for our workers and for affordability for Canadians from coast to coast. Positioning · 8 wordsIt is time to get results for them.PositioningPartly on point

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