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Richard Bragdon

63 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Jeremy Patzer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank my colleague for a tremendous speech. It is always a pleasure to listen to him in this House. He is very factual as well. That is what I really appreciate about what he has to say. He brings so much substance to what he says in the House. We can contrast that with the fact that we are dealing with a bill today that is thicker than most phone books we find in this country now. I really cannot believe it. This is not the first bill the government has tabled to try to fix 10 years of disastrous governance over there. It already has Bill C-5. This is another admission that that bill does not work. Are we going to be back here again debating another bill to undo more bad Liberal laws from the government? Are Canadians expected to believe that it is going to get things right this time?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 43%Procedure 8%Aside 32%Positioning 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 27 wordsI thank my hon. colleague from Swift Current—Grasslands—Kindersley.1 What a great representative he is for his people in standing up for hard-working Canadians, farmers and resource workers.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsOne expression comes to mind.Procedure Aside · 20 wordsThere’s a song that has words that say that we need “a little less talk and a lot more action”.2Aside Positioning · 11 wordsIt is time for action now to get results for Canadians.PositioningPartly on point

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